It is important for the children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?What sort of punishment should parents

Yes, learning the difference between right and wrong is crucial in everyone's life especially to children as this stage is the gaining and learning stage to them, what ever they learn in this stage will remain quite same for their lifetime until the perception is altered. However to make them gaining something, it is not necessary to punish them. The parents and teachers should use various other calm methods to make their children grow up with good manners.

Punishing any person can bring negative consequences such as making children's mind as punishment is solution to every anger or misbehave. The child can also get used to it if the parent is punishing often, and thus making no results of the act afterwards. The parents should teach the calmness and power of smooth understanding to children so that the child can get to know about their wrongdoings and learn through calmness and willingness.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 273, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, thus, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 41.998997996 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 755.0 1615.20841683 47% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 152.0 315.596192385 48% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96710526316 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 4.20363070211 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59866755491 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 176.041082164 56% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.651315789474 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 221.4 506.74238477 44% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.4973752738 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.833333333 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304086996819 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129445443362 0.084324248473 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0715782430419 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229731844657 0.151304729494 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0943471217466 0.056905535591 166% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 78.4519038076 40% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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