It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Learning is a life long process and therefore it is believed that "we all keep learning from womb to tomb". Presently, learning the difference between right and wrong is a quite challenging for children due to their impulsiveness. However, it is argued that children must be able to see the difference between right and wrong and punishment is the fine treatment. Here, i would like to disaccord with the given statement.
There are manifold points to support my view. First and foremost, sometime, children who are immature become aggressive and stubborn if they are punished for their mistakes...
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Essay evaluation report
is a quite challenging
is quite challenging
Sentence: Besides this, they do not want to be punished in front of their peer groups as its a matter of their self-respect.
Description: The tag a determiner, possessive is not usually followed by a
Suggestion: Refer to its and a
Sentence: Here, i would like to disaccord with the given statement.
Error: disaccord Suggestion: discord
flaws:
'On the other hand' means 'However'. It doesn't mean 'On another hand'.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 21 15
No. of Words: 349 350
No. of Characters: 1774 1500
No. of Different Words: 196 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.322 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.083 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.754 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 126 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 109 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 80 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 47 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.619 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.403 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.619 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.275 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.503 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.087 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 381, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...punishment is the fine treatment. Here, i would like to disaccord with the given ...
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Line 5, column 366, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...nished in front of their peer groups as its a matter of their self-respect. Thus, p...
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Line 7, column 117, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eal life experience with off springs can be very handy to teach them the lessons ...
^^
Line 7, column 306, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... of jealous. Consequently, polite method with the perfect combination of examples...
^^
Line 11, column 69, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... punishment sets the limitations to make someone compact person. However, it can ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, therefore, thus, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1852.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30659025788 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90307233802 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56446991404 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 558.9 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.4991115732 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.1904761905 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.619047619 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61904761905 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 15.0 3.9879759519 376% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259714096522 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0723978165828 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638748920822 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132188463118 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0829415596788 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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