Every human nature are involve in life long learning process. I totally agree that at an early age all children should learn the positive and negative things in the world. However, i dont think that punishment as the enforcing factor for the learning process in the children. Many children have their own mental and physical capability to learn something inherited within themselves.
Children with the vision hearing impairment, they feel totally devastated after the punishment such children needs love and care of family and society so that they can learn the things in positive way. for instance, a child with the visual impairment whichcannot see every things clearly, and also the teachers and family scold him for not getting better marks what commiserating and sympathetic moment the children have, we can also think too.
Generally speaking, children have very low thinking capability as someone punishes children for something, children are unaware of consequences and make themselves hangover on the roof or poision themselves. These cases are mainly seen in your country hospitals emergency deparment. it represents the mental tourtour a children suffers after the punishment.
To sum up, although it represent great value for every children to learn about something right and wrong, punishment can never be the part of the learning process.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1154.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 213.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41784037559 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68361505592 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629107981221 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 346.5 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.9143661216 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.4 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259347658931 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106461359717 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.069265083581 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165032288495 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634641392174 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.