It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children?
Educating children is always a top concern of parents., in which punishment is a vital way for them to help their children distinguish between the good and the bad to become better. In my opinion, it is necessary for parents to teach their children with punishment.
On the one hand, punishment gives us a lot of advantages. First of all, many good habits as well as hobbies are formed gradually in children's personalities. For instance, they can know how to perform in daily life like getting up early, doing homework, housework, simultaneously also build and improve their favourite in all fields for their own. Moreover, children will moderately have satisfactory qualities such as self-confident, self-controlled or self- sufficient and many more. All of them make it easier for children to have a better life in the future together with becoming a polite citizen to contribute to make their countries more civilised.
On the other hand, if punishment is too strict, especially relating to bodies, it can lead to unexpected cousequenses for young generation. They may feel afraid of everything, resulting in being inconfident in front of public or reserved. isolating themselves from other people. More seriously, it is possible that they become too stressed , which leads to a lot of pitiful situations like suiciding or stealing.vv. Therefore, the best way to educate children is the balance between coddle and strictness, not always being serious because at early age, children should grow up in both strength and psychology. It's really important that parents should understand and not punish them too severely but instead giving them useful advices or lessons for them to study. Besides, if mistakes are big, children should be punished by some suitable punishment like not doing things that they like or being forced to stay at home all day to think about what they have done.
In conclusion, children is the future generation of the world so that everyone has to appreciate and give them the best things, in particular parents and teachers. They should not always criticise or punish them too strictly but love and gently advise them; therefore, they will feel much more comfortable and less stressed, leading to a relaxed life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Isolating
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, may, moreover, really, so, therefore, well, as to, for instance, in conclusion, in particular, such as, as well as, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1875.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 366.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12295081967 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87848835226 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571038251366 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 572.4 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6511818973 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.1875 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.875 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0625 7.06120827912 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241052933556 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769499487775 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621413915082 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153619384857 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582062254683 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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