It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives.
Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?
These days, risk plays a vital role on promotive factors leading to success, which some people accept in their career path and life. Although this trend may contain some potential drawbacks, I presume that the benefit of taking risks overcomes the disadvantage.
On the one hand, risk acceptance can have a detrimental impact on mental health as well as financial cost. In fact, individuals would have suffered stress and anxiety without supporters for a long time when they try to complete a dangerous choice. This is because if their achievements are undesirable, it would take considerable time and effort and everything is back to square one. Besides, a struggling business can face potential failure with a huge financial cost. As a result, when people or organizations are unable to repay outstanding debts or obligations, bankruptcy is a legal procedure.
On the other hand, I am convinced that dealing with risk is the best way to become successful in both individual areas and job prospects. First and foremost, some people are willing to pay for their ambitions. While most others abandon their attempt to cope with problems, they are still relentlessly learning and pursuing their objectives that make it
possible to enhance their position and profits. Moreover, to work as a doctor or lawyer, people have to apply to prestigious universities. With a minority rate of acceptance from these educational institutions, there are best potential career prospects and opportunities for graduates.
Inconclution, taking risks should be done by people, even though it includes some negative impact on their life, I believed that more accomplishment would be reached by some struggling with dangerous.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 353, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'are the best'.
Suggestion: are the best
...m these educational institutions, there are best potential career prospects and opportun...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, if, may, moreover, so, still, well, while, in fact, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1446.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33579335793 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01058620668 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623616236162 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0213611839 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.230769231 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8461538462 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46153846154 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233292578964 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0764938349613 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487309438154 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128720466131 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388240557783 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.