It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives.
Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?
Risks; something which can lead to rocket or go backward in people’s lives. In my opinion it is necessary to anticipate result of our decision before do them. In a word, if people be aware about the potential risks, they would be seen numerous pros in advance.
To be talking about the advantages of taking risks, we should firstly mention that all the opportunity around us depends on our decisions we will make. The decisions which would be correct or not. Since we cannot aware about all the up comings, then, most part of our lives on basis of risks correctness. If some biographies have been read, it can be easily understand that most of the successes are in the result of taking risks. It is undeniable that we should aware about our decision by searching or learning. Ones who take risk on investing in the stock market in a robust way, and gain much, are not less around us. Also, a person who take risk on choosing a partner put an step in a way of his/her calm and evolution for the entire life.
Unfortunately, there is lack of talking about failure and the wrong risks. People should learn on which occasion it is proper to take risks. If a person is a householder, specially have children, it is an obvious mistake to try strange things on his job. People should be taught about the correct way of taking risks. Taking risks in personal life also can have some effects which is never forgotten. For instance, if a parent unaware about the life of their child, they would be face with nurturing drawbacks, because they only want to risk on trusting too much on society or their friends.
In conclusion, by exemplify some effective and positive risks, it could be taken that people can enjoy sweet result of appropriate risks in their lives. However, as we can shortage the probability of failure by our correct approaches, I think the advantages of these risky decision would be more and more.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, so, then, for instance, i think, in conclusion, talking about, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1580.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64705882353 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53167477426 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520588235294 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3333333333 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.7777777778 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8888888889 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231419179488 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0726077766693 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543891642205 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137136706336 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0612813553512 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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