It is important for student to attends class regularly and study by oneself. Explain why?
The ultimate target of study in university is achieving good result, so we have plentifully of learning to lead us the efficient way in school and home. But I think the best way to achieve it is to join in the lesson, where teacher teaching and do reach by yourself.
Fist, when we participate in the class that is we in the different environment. We learn how to adapt to it, approve it; from that point, one of us to find the new relationship, to make a friend and built the connection with strange people for many affairs in the future. At the same time, when we present in class, teachers who have experience with knowledge and specialist skills will tell us new acquaintance; to teach us not only profession ability but also dexterity life. And this is where we can improve soft skills like communicate; team-work and behave with someone.The most important we attain is the attitude to approve right and get rid of the bad thing. For example, when you have a task and do it with your colleges, you can put individualistic ideology for other people, you must accept all opinions of them and skip for doing the best mission.
Second, when we have free time we training by yourself, this give you a lot of useful skills. For instance, when educator gives you homework you must do it and finish it in time so that we establish a plan to balance your life and your learning. For this reason, you adhere your principle to keep everything on the schedule; it helps us how to set up time and take responsible for your actions.
For all helpful, in my opinion, both way is best for many students to practice, and if you do well, it will lead you an excellent consequence in your education.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...cate; team-work and behave with someone.The most important we attain is the attitud...
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Message: Did you mean 'you're' or 'you are'?
Suggestion: you're; you are
...tablish a plan to balance your life and your learning. For this reason, you adhere y...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...and take responsible for your actions. For all helpful, in my opinion, both way is...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, so, well, for example, for instance, i think, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 24.0651302605 204% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1384.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50814332248 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64307309651 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560260586319 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 6.0 0.384769539078 1559% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.0431585349 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.818181818 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.9090909091 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.45454545455 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105036275594 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.042635997256 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0298482980369 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0667203718525 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0293982089043 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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