Irrefutably, to help all people worldwide is not an easy task, so government should take practical measures to help people in their country. This, in my perspective is an effective way to deal with all people.
To begin with, it is easy for the government to locate people with problems of its own country. This is because every Nation has different norms and conditions for developing there, so it is convenient for the Nations to filter people according to their requirements. The census done by USA in 2009 revealed that our country e by dividing people in two different stratas depending upon their requirements can filter them and hence solve their hurdles in an effective way. Thus, government should only concentrate on its own people.
The issues of people vary country to country. Disparities may be going to to differences in in climate, language, living style, aboding conditions, education, job opportunities and the same. To exemplify, American Association of human rights reported that most of the problems people face in their countries are educational, employment, and problems with regards to equality and rights in the society. Even though the issues can be resolved in the better way in own country due to disparities and different laws. Thus, government of country can solve people's problems in a better manner.
Nevertheless certain people contend that most people face almost same type of issues in each country. Most common mess in every country is related to education, job offers and human rights. Moreover, people voices are usually get dumped in countries and some people achieve status and make their life easy using detrimental ways. For instance, an article published in Times of India mention that if nations come together
and contribute to solve the disputes of their people then each country will become developed instead of developing. Therefore, to stand with people at world level is the best way to achieve the top position for every country.
To conclude, although helping people globally is the best way, people with problems can be identified easily in heir own country because of differences and different criterias of survival in their nations.
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...eoples problems in a better manner. Nevertheless certain people contend that most people...
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...be identified easily in heir own country because of differences and different cri...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, thus, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1839.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16573033708 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74925676566 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511235955056 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 571.5 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.0353594344 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.176470588 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9411764706 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.82352941176 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338907981575 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124705994017 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0769402012262 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199559197372 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.042866120694 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 182, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rms and conditions for developing there, so it is convenient for the Nations to f...
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Line 2, column 454, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an effective way" with adverb for "effective"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...lter them and hence solve their hurdles in an effective way. Thus, government should only concentra...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 72, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: to
...ry to country. Disparities may be going to to differences in in climate, language, li...
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Line 3, column 90, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: in
...parities may be going to to differences in in climate, language, living style, abodin...
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Line 3, column 519, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to disparities and different laws. Thus, government of country can solve peoples...
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Line 3, column 534, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...and different laws. Thus, government of country can solve peoples problems in a ...
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Suggestion: Nevertheless,
...eoples problems in a better manner. Nevertheless certain people contend that most people...
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Line 5, column 200, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., job offers and human rights. Moreover, people voices are usually get dumped in ...
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Line 5, column 307, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... achieve status and make their life easy using detrimental ways. For instance, an...
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Line 5, column 367, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ways. For instance, an article published in Times of India mention that if nation...
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Line 5, column 424, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ia mention that if nations come together and contribute to solve the disputes of ...
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Line 7, column 129, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...be identified easily in heir own country because of differences and different cri...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, thus, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1839.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16573033708 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74925676566 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511235955056 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 571.5 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.0353594344 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.176470588 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9411764706 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.82352941176 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338907981575 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124705994017 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0769402012262 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199559197372 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.042866120694 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.