some authorities try to help and save people all over the world. Altough in the first point this action seems exremlely gamely, actually it is a fiction idea that these governments can help everyone. Hence, it is better to focus on boosting and modernizing thier own countries.
First and foremost, some people concur that all the nations are same as each other in their rights, hence the state has to help each other around the world. Since all the humans are alive, they have this right to live in the best situation. Thus, if any of them has a problem, the power should help her/him. Moreover,the authorities' responsibility is to solve issues without any attention to nationality, geographical area and the type of problem. Last but not least, when people worldwide have less trouble and undergo safety, this situation has plenty of beneficial impacts on another people, make them happier.
On another point of view, the word is tightly expanded, thus, much money is needed to fix everyone's issues worldwide. About 8 milliard people live around the world that most of them my have some problems. If authorities make decision to help them, must have huge sources of state budget and and employees; however, it is not necessary since every country or population has an especial government having responsibility to help its own people. Therefore, each authority is responsible for its country. When the government has any specific area to rule, it can schedule exactly for the trouble exists. In this situation, countries are able to boost and improve more than past.
To conclude, in my point of view, the statesmen must pay attention to the rules and countries. Because, if each government develops it's country and and make it better, after a time, I'm all over the world change to a heaven.
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: lanhhoang
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Some
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...ion. Thus, if any of them has a problem, the power should help her/him. Moreover,...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authorities'' or 'authority's'?
Suggestion: authorities'; authority's
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...y and and make it better, after a time, Im all over the world change to a heaven.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, hence, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1493.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92739273927 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65099305215 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554455445545 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8645679556 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3125 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9375 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.875 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218649083636 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0677931465442 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612251657861 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140180716498 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039681194616 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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