It is inevitable that traditional cultures will be lost as technology develops. Technology and traditional cultures are incompatible.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays, it has been apparent in recent years that the technological innovations is one of the hottest trend public concern about. It is believed that technology has transformed the world as well as conflicted toward traditional culture in order to get negative impacts on it. Personally i completely disagree with this statement that older cultures acts as compatible sectors to the new advancements,
To begin with, it is undeniable to suppose that technology contributes massive of global achievements for human race. First and foremost, this innovation has also given us the chance to re-visit our histories, cultures, languages and so on via many websites as well as stereo devices. For instance, due to 3-D machines and other cutting-edge equipments several historical events, even valuable scenes in the past is reappeared in the current our life that carry hope for studying. Secondly, the type of invention helps us to store the huge amount of precious information which is related to main fields such as finance, economy culture even worldwide wide among foreign countries.
However, i totally oppose the idea that traditional cultures has fallen back in some part of the world because of the breakthrough's technology. In face, in some eastern countries like China, Thailand or India people still prefer to wear traditional clothes in order to participate in old-style festival while mix with several modern designs nowadays. Another thing have to be noticed that the mixture between technology and tradition cultures is the strange point to show out anyone who is interested in experiencing new things.
To conclude, although technological innovation plays an essential part of human life, i am still believe that traditional culture should be given more attention and contributions to support for advancement.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'breakthroughs'' or 'breakthrough's'?
Suggestion: breakthroughs'; breakthrough's
...n some part of the world because of the breakthroughs technology. In face, in some eastern co...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... plays an essential part of human life, i am still believe that traditional cultu...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'believed'.
Suggestion: believed
...ssential part of human life, i am still believe that traditional culture should be give...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, well, while, another thing, for instance, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1540.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38461538462 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99544048513 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646853146853 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 33.4956713621 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.0 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.6 7.06120827912 193% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246081147682 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0908386488135 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570741255747 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149243153299 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389232552459 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.0946893788 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.52 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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