It is often argued that friends cannot replace a well family, meanwhile parents are able to compensate.
I completely agree with opinion and, I think that family relationship is much more important than friends.
First of all, I believe that people cannot live far to family, his need it.Even if, someone his many friends, but feels sad and failing all the day. This person doesn't a good family to keep with him, while succeeding
in the society his objective. For example, street kids got a lot of friends, but have a bad life style and doesn't study.
That's why it's more important to have a well parents than friends.
Secondly, family can always compensate all friends, she gives her son their needs. It is clear that there is strong relationship between everyone in the family. Parents are following these children for many problems then
achieve a better result in the school as well as in their life. For instance, a good deal of research said that a good family
relationship can help people to success in their life, despite all they have friends. Thus,advantages of parents can
always replace every people close to their son.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that the family is more important than friends, then have to keep of family relationship than to friends.
- The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 27
- All over the world, societies are facing a growing problem with obesity.This problem affects both children and adults. What are the reasons for thisrise in obesity, How could it be tackled? 61
- The graph below shows female unemployment rates in each country of the United Kingdom in 2013 and 2014.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 61
- the charts show the number of marriages and divorces in the USA, 1970-2000 and Marital status of adults Americans, 1970 and 2000. 78
- Some people believe that developments in the field of artificial intelligence will have a positive impact on our lives in the near future. Others, by contrast, are worried that we are not prepared for a world in which computers are more intelligent than h 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 76, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Even
... cannot live far to family, his need it.Even if, someone his many friends, but feels...
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Line 4, column 162, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...ad and failing all the day. This person doesnt a good family to keep with him, while s...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... friends, but have a bad life style and doesnt study. Thats why its more important to...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...ave a bad life style and doesnt study. Thats why its more important to have a well p...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , advantages
...ife, despite all they have friends. Thus,advantages of parents can always replace every pe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, then, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1073.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 218.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92201834862 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56412170955 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550458715596 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 320.4 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.5119923347 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.4166666667 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1666666667 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.38176352705 228% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290005012825 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111920682282 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0898532760639 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125163615963 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0764445615417 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.85 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 78.4519038076 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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