It is a natural process for animal species to become extinct (e.g. Dinosaur, dodos …) There is no reason why people should try to prevent this from happening. Do you agree or disagree?
Some people believe that human should not protect animal species from extinction due to its natural happening. I personally disagree with this opinion and will support my view points in the essay below.
It is not the natural reason leading to the disapearance of animal species and human have contributed to cause this serious problem. A large number of animals in the natural habitat are on the verge of extinction. Human hunting action is a primary example to prove my argument. Many people believe that ivory is a medicine curing many dangerous disease;therefore, they killed numerous elephants just for its tusks. As a result, a great number of rare elephant species are no longer existence in biological world. It is an urgent warning for us about the consequence of our doing.
Not only do people save wild animals from extinction but also balance our life.
There will be the biodiversity loss if some rare animals become extinct. Accordingly, the food chain is disrupted. For instance, the ocean food chain was unbalance since the rising of sea temperature. It is true that ocean biodivesity plays a primary role in providing food for human. Unless people prevent the disapearance of animal species, our life will be affected.
In conclusion, the degeneration of many wild animals does not always occur naturally and human should have drastic action to protect them from high risk of extinction.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, if, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1183.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 232.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09913793103 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7967429194 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594827586207 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.1252666209 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.8666666667 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4666666667 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290685387389 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.086955765622 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677881298553 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159284545273 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442778241436 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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