It is often observed that the society is being experienced of changeable in parenting. Having compulsory attendance of training courses for parents in order to raise their children is a good idea. I agree with this statement.
To begin with, there are numerous reasons why delivering training courses to parents is good. First and foremost, busiest schedule of parent keeps them away from their children, so providing professional guidance and assistance could help them in well take care and nurture. Secondly, attending for these professional courses prove as boon to those who is going to be parent. Due to less knowing about well take caring in the early days of infant’s birth, these courses help regarding feeding and other valuable guidance of their new born child.
As far as for the new parents parenting courses are concerned, it also provides the better mechanism of parenting through these lucrative programs. This involves the adjustment of timing, behavioural development and other values for the society which make him later as a good civillian.
In conclusion, providing professional subjects and programs helps to parents to be more real with parenting circumstances. Regardless of marking as talents, it became the moral responsibility to those who are completely in to youthfulia
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 113, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the busiest'.
Suggestion: , the busiest
...s to parents is good. First and foremost, busiest schedule of parent keeps them away from...
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Line 3, column 481, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to regard' or 'regard'.
Suggestion: to regard; regard
...infant's birth, these courses help regarding feeding and other valuable guidance of ...
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Line 7, column 70, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'parent'.
Suggestion: parent
...essional subjects and programs helps to parents to be more real with parenting circumst...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, as for, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1107.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 206.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37378640777 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95146030276 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616504854369 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 335.7 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9103030123 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.636363636 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7272727273 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323031816827 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123794366164 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106646886802 0.0667982634062 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200166557863 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0624860305545 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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