It is necessary to parents to attend parenting training course to bring their children up. Do u agree or disagree?
Undoubtedly, raising children has never been simple for parents, especially in the stage of advanced technology. The parenting courses are becoming new trend of modern citizens to support them in nourishing children and I partly agree with this idea. there are many other ways to perform this work equally valuable experience instead take an expensive course.
On the one hand, joining a unique class providing full of knowledge about taking care a baby seems to be necessary for most of younger generation parents. Many tasks and skills would be impossible such holding infants, feeding kids or even lulling babies if they donot take any course. Therefore, parenting courses which included great deal of beneficial original imformation from child rearing experts will save young couples in many difficulties. For example, in developed country such as japan, many mothers educated how to message a child in a Montessori program which is essential for growing baby bones and increasing blood circulation.
On the other hand, paying for a parenting courses sometimes could be the second choice as there are additional methods available. By using the powerful of Internet knowledge, parents can entry thousands of websites and forums which almost free of charge and unlimited advices from other couples. These communications are usually practical and useful basing on real cases and maybe it brings more experiences than theoretical courses. Moreover, learning from grandparents is also wonderful way to raise a child due to their children might inherit their traditional characters.
To conclude, we cannot deny the advantage of parenting courses which can bring about shaping the child’s personality and physical body throughout his life. Otherwise, they can also learn this skill through the mass of network and older parent experiences.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 252, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, moreover, second, so, therefore, for example, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1562.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46153846154 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77868872974 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.695804195804 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.1751262608 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 120.153846154 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.69230769231 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209425143474 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0692611720978 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579093624508 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126869986825 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420225172768 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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