It is neither possible nor useful for a country to provide university places for a high proportion of young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There has been a difference opinions regarding the accessibility of university education for majority of young people. In my opinion, provide tertiary education for a massive number of youngsters is both unfeasible and no values to society.
On the one hand, I believe that it is impracticable for many young people attend university. Firstly, personal financial burden may prevent people continuing higher education after leaving high school. The tuition fees at this level are extremely high so not all of the teenagers and their families can afford. Secondly, the university place require young people to have academic abilities. If students are not passionate about what they are learning, they may not graduate on time and know what to do next in their life.
On the other hand, it seems beneficial to provide more university places for more young people. From a personal perspective, it can be argued that having degrees provide more job opportunities, career progression and an improved quality of life for students who take in university courses. On the societal level, accommodating youngsters with university place can lead to new inventions, economic growth, and greater future prosperity.
In conclusion, I believe that it is both impossible and practical for a country to provide university places for a high proportion of young people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 260, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...at this level are extremely high so not all of the teenagers and their families can afford...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1147.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 214.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35981308411 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9784688965 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602803738318 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 373.5 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.3655415842 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.272727273 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4545454545 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.54545454545 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.36085910415 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13755171856 0.084324248473 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0990088217122 0.0667982634062 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238008618698 0.151304729494 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0966665317707 0.056905535591 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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