It is not necessary to have access to the Internet to live a full life.What is your opinion.
In this highly sophisticated scenario, Internet become a more an essential part of our life and works dependent on this device. However, I believe that interest such a best technique and without to this life is not possible.
Certainly there are more benefits. Firstly, with the help of modern technology people easily connect with each other because there are multifarious social sites are available such as whatsup,Facebook which are very fruitfull.For example, nowadays, most of the students go to abroad far from their parents while, through the vast technology they attached with their family members.Furthermore, face to face conversation is a highly successful technique. Admittedly, thirty years ago we talk with others but less chance provided for the online concept however, increasing the possibilities of talking with other during the internet. Secondly, it provides entertainment in a significant amount. The number of people playing online games and participated number larger proportion of children won the prize.
To be more precise, various types of apps are available which help in the study pattern.To illustrate, Google, Ucbrower.These apps always help to solved any kind of problem related to study because there have lot of meanings of a
single word as well as Wikipedia gives huge information about any kind of topic.In addition to, we can collect online material and do study at their homw without the help of any teacher because youtune website help more capable to reaching any type of information.
According to my perception, the internet is an extremely effective tool as it help us in every field although that is used for the business purpose or any kind of other things.
- The Charts below show the popularity of different political parties in a country before and after the general election The election won by the Conservative party and they formed a government with the liberal Democrats 77
- The graph below shows the pollution levels in London between 1600 and 2000. 73
- Unemployment is getting increasingly serious in many countries Some people think student only need to get primary education while others think secondary education is necessary What s your opinion 74
- It is generally believed that education is of vital importance to the development of individuals and the well being of societies What should education consist of to fulfil both these functions 75
- The graph below shows the amount of money spent on books in Germany, France, Italy and Austria between 1995 to 2005. 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'a more essential'?
Suggestion: a more essential
...phisticated scenario, Internet become a more an essential part of our life and works dependent on...
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Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Facebook
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Suggestion: Furthermore
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, in addition, kind of, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1436.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27941176471 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03351378476 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628676470588 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 151.494611402 49.4020404114 307% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 159.555555556 106.682146367 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.2222222222 20.7667163134 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.1111111111 7.06120827912 214% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0535923274942 0.244688304435 22% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0242611188158 0.084324248473 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0274222962674 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0336815664882 0.151304729494 22% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307874917488 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 50.2224549098 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.94 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.94 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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