It is often said that children learn best by observing the behaviour of their adults and copy itTo what extent do you think the given statement is right

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Children
...he most attractive stage in human life. children learn those what they feel and saw from...
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Suggestion: .
...fter observing they seek to inculcate it . However i personally think that there a...
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Suggestion: However,
...r observing they seek to inculcate it . However i personally think that there are many ...
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...rsonally think that there are many other ways contributing them to learn best so,...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'learn the best'.
Suggestion: learn the best
...e many other ways contributing them to learn best so, the given statement is not fully ri...
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Line 1, column 269, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to best', 'to well'
Suggestion: to best; to well
... other ways contributing them to learn best so, the given statement is not fully ri...
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Suggestion: First
...better behaviour as compared to adults. first and formost peer interaction is the mai...
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Suggestion: , foods
...hey imbibe their habits such as dressing,foods and other life forms . so, they use it ...
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Suggestion: .
...h as dressing,foods and other life forms . so, they use it in their personal life....
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Suggestion: So
...s dressing,foods and other life forms . so, they use it in their personal life. mo...
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Suggestion: Moreover
...so, they use it in their personal life. moreover the other ways of mass media such as ...
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Suggestion: moreover,
...so, they use it in their personal life. moreover the other ways of mass media such as ...
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Suggestion:
...e. moreover the other ways of mass media such as television ,mobile and interne...
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...er the other ways of mass media such as television ,mobile and internet push up...
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Suggestion: ,
... ways of mass media such as television ,mobile and internet push up them to ado...
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...s media such as television ,mobile and internet push up them to adopt different...
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Suggestion:
...to adopt different lifestyle they choose modern living standard and behaviour so,...
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Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to better', 'to well'
Suggestion: to better; to well
... is also the kind to help them to learn better. in addition to, children can be effect...
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Suggestion: In
... the kind to help them to learn better. in addition to, children can be effected t...
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Suggestion: Next
...how to communicate and behave to other. next, innate qualities also a strong way to ...
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Suggestion:
...ualities also a strong way to teach them On the other hand, it is considered that...
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Suggestion: .
...life they influence more and try to copy .thus kids can inculcate better with the ...
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Suggestion: Furthermore
...e better with the help of their parents.Furthermore, their grand parents teach them the val...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...e of traditions and cultures which they cant learn from the other ways so elders hel...
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...p a lot in their life for well behaviour To conclude, children age is the impress...
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Suggestion: However
...ortant activities from their guardians. however, i think their enviroment and their com...
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Suggestion: I
...tivities from their guardians. however, i think their enviroment and their compan...
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Suggestion:
...oment and their company also effect most
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, i think, in addition, in fact, such as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1435.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94827586207 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6264667421 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527586206897 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 165.529936869 49.4020404114 335% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 143.5 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.7 7.06120827912 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 28.0 5.01903807615 558% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219636472079 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0922886370881 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0651109466784 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157677852998 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.054713261652 0.056905535591 96% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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