It is probable that in the future there will be no borders and people will be able to move freely between countries.
To what extent do you agree with this opinion?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays, it is really important for people to prefer nationalism or internationalism in the modern world.
Many countries eliminated their borders against foreign people, however many regions are reached independence and establish new borders.
In the past, the human has the freedom to live across the world, owing to abundant resources in the world but in recent century many regions set new borders against foreign people because they believe it is helpful to save their security and resources. As a result of that activities, creates many people nationalist who prefer their own country to other countries. In addition, many ethics and races create new countries and fight to defend their independence, due to creating new countries many people who have not enough resources fall in war repetition cycle against rich countries, furthermore, rich countries fight new battles to become richer than before, for instance, in world war 2 Nazi regime settle war against other countries to reach more resources.
From past century until now, some philosophies wanted unite for human in world war because they strongly believe humans could be free to live in the world, moreover, based on morality, is not any different between human at all, such as skin colors or genders. many people think borders is not a good idea in modern life in that due to virtual network people eliminate their borders and could access to worldwide. In addition, humans rights paper defense human freedom to choice their lands; unfortunately, countries do not respect that.
Many people prefer nationalism to internationalism and have their own advantage and disadvantages; however, I truly think people go through the way to eliminate physical borders between countries such as that happened in virtual networks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 261, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Many
...at all, such as skin colors or genders. many people think borders is not a good idea...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, really, so, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1520.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35211267606 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78670434153 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542253521127 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 91.4558518604 49.4020404114 185% => OK
Chars per sentence: 168.888888889 106.682146367 158% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.5555555556 20.7667163134 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1111111111 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0943513081893 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.049168682428 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0245848963233 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0585141344905 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.026527301253 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.5 13.0946893788 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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