With the modernization of the society, it is not uncommon to see both the parents working. There are various reasons for it. Firstly, everybody wants to be financially independent. Secondly, with the increasing inflation and cost of living, it sometimes becomes necessary for both the partners to work. It is clear that this trend has some undeniable impacts upon their family lives and their children.
When both parents are working, it seems to be difficult to gather together with the whole family, especially when the work timings are different. Children suffer the most from this situation. First, children's health problems should be blamed to the parents. Working parents nowadays tend to devote virtually their whole time to work in order to ensure material well- being, which means that they may spend less time carefully taking care of their children's diet. Therefore, without supervision, children might eat unhealthy food or lead a sedentary lifestyle. This explain why close parental care and control is crucial in ensuring children's balanced diet and healthy life. Second, children are of high chance to be vulnerable to get moral sicknesses. This may be because they may feel lonely without any assistance from their parents in the crisis time. The loneliness of children degrades their self- confidence and self- esteem, which can pose a threat to their future lives. It is reported that children who do not have a close and supportive relationships with their parents in the childhood have to struggle more in their studies and work than their normal ones. A drawback of the both parents working is ego. As both are independent, ego often comes from these two partners, there would be a lot of arguments. There is no doubt that the increase level in divorce rate can partly due to the decrease in the tolerance level.
In conclusion, it is sometimes important for both the parents to work but no one can deny the fact that it certainly has detrimental impacts on their offspring and family lives. It is necessary to pay extra times to constantly take an eye on our children and try to spend as much time with our family as possible.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 261, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: there's
...appiness from working. It is clear that theres some undeniable problems associated wit...
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Line 2, column 226, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... in order to ensure material well- being , which means that they may spend less ti...
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Line 2, column 1024, Rule ID: ONE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'One drawback', 'a drawback', or simply 'drawbacks'?
Suggestion: One drawback; A drawback; Drawbacks
...tudies and work than their normal ones. One drawbacks of the both parents working is ego. As ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, second, so, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1664.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93768545994 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52639163016 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578635014837 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2467913719 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8823529412 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8235294118 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.70588235294 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313903112685 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0980324514866 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536415215095 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210151814647 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0223277115047 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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