It is said that adulterated food Is a reason behind Detriorated health of all age group masses. How far you agree or disagree?
Food adulteration is an addition of an another food substance to a food item in order to increase its quantity. For instance, the give topic asserts that behind every deteriorated health of all age group; adulterated food responsible? As I completely agree to the question, I will shape my opinion by giving examples and assentions.
Firstly, there are three types of food adulteration ; intentionally, unintentionally and natural adulteration. All of them has a huge effect on human body. Moreover, if we talk about the products which are having noxious effects one of them is milk. Similarly, water is adulterated into milk to make its quantity in bulk. There are many effects of this happening to a human body which are; Memory loss, heart diseases and eye loss, etc.
Secondly, as we all know that people from countryside area are less affected from food adulteration where as people from cities are suffering more. Further more, people in villages are not dependent on packaging food products as much people of cities. Similarly, people who drink or eat package products are suffering from adulteration as well. For example, in India, coffee powder that we get in packing is usually adulterated by tamarind seeds, chicory powder to add black colour. It's harmful effect is that it causes diarrhea, stomach disorders, giddiness and severe joint pains.
To conclude, As we have seen that food adulteration have alot of negative effects. So i tend to believe that government should ban food adulteration and stringent laws should be made, Because food is the basic necessity of an individual's life. Food should be pure, nutritious and free from all type of adulteration.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 37, Rule ID: AN_ANOTHER[1]
Message: One of these determiners is redundant in this context. Choose only one: 'a food' or 'another food'.
Suggestion: a food; another food
Food adulteration is an addition of an another food substance to a food item in order to in...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... loss, heart diseases and eye loss, etc. Secondly, as we all know that people fro...
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Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
...re less affected from food adulteration where as people from cities are suffering more....
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...teration where as people from cities are suffering more. Further more, people in ...
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Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...dependent on packaging food products as much people of cities. Similarly, people who...
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...erated by tamarind seeds, chicory powder to add black colour. Its harmful effect ...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ation have alot of negative effects. So i tend to believe that government should ...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...cause food is the basic necessity of an individuals life. Food should be pure, nutritious a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, similarly, so, well, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1406.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13138686131 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91434525485 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609489051095 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.8681674817 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.875 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.125 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.875 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209664747375 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0680600187902 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.068351500365 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132591948964 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0790595930554 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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