It seems that many companies today are becoming much more concerned with profit than with the happiness of workers. How could companies take better care of their workers in the future? Give reasons to your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
It is true that companies are worrying about profit than thinking their workers contentment. However, firm should take care of workers future life despite need to be some measures. This essay will high light the problems associated with this issue and take some remedial measures to resolve it.
Analyzing the statement and explaining further, the first and most important reason is that competition is very high in the market. Most of the business are trying to make money to bid with other companies whatever the value. For that reason, many firms are keeping employees to work long time without any extra payment or bonus. Another pivotal aspect in this regards is that achieving top range of the of the other business, due to sustainability of company. Categorially discussing, it can not be ignored that companies are more concerned about profits rather than taking care of staffs.
Steps to deal with this problem are many but the most significant ones is not complicated but practical and accessible. Besides, employees should be motivated by companies. If the firm are providing some training to workers, will be giving more effort to the business, Moreover, company can arrange some provident fund and gratuity for staffs to security purpose. Most of the time frim are gaining lots of margin through the workers. So the authority should provide some extra holiday or vacation to travel different countries. Hence, it is clear that company can take some extra care of staffs.
In conclusion, according to argument aforementioned above, one can reach to a conclusion that while company should make more margins, employees would be happy with demands.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, hence, however, if, moreover, so, while, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1397.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17407407407 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65027109931 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585185185185 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5127679343 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1333333333 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239012106644 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0780026859498 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671926462652 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150505515349 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0465631078218 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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