It is sometimes said that people should be encouraged to get married before they are 30, as this is best both for the individual and for society.Do you agree or disagree?

Submitted by pat1987 on Sun, 04/30/2017 - 04:26

in my own understanding, it is far more better to get married before the age of 30, because this generation of youth need parental guides, love ,and care, let us take for am example if you marry at the age of 20 years and you give birth to 5 children it's very possible that you will take good care of the children and provide education for each of them because without good education they can end up being a nobody in the society. 2, early marriage also can help the individual and society by reducing the rate of fornication in the society, i know many people will disagree with my view saying that even at 30 people can still take care of there children but i still stand on my word that getting married before the age of 30 remains the best and can help individual and society

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Average: 2.2 (1 vote)
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IELTS Writing Task II - IELTS Academic

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 632.0 1615.20841683 39% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 148.0 315.596192385 47% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.27027027027 5.12529762239 83% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48791127476 4.20363070211 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31503486225 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 176.041082164 54% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.641891891892 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 204.3 506.74238477 40% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 16.0721442886 12% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 74.0 20.2975951904 365% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.0 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 316.0 106.682146367 296% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 74.0 20.7667163134 356% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278201251485 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.204690316223 0.084324248473 243% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0196466205852 0.0667982634062 29% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.278201251485 0.151304729494 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 35.7 13.0946893788 273% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 13.29 50.2224549098 26% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 29.8 11.3001002004 264% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 8.67 12.4159519038 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 15.0 78.4519038076 19% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 9.78957915832 291% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 31.6 10.1190380762 312% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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