It is sometimes said that people should be encouraged to get married before they are 30 as this is best both for individual and society. do you agree or disagree?
Despite some controversies, there is a common idea that people should be motivated to get married before they turn 30 years old. From my point of view, I strongly agree with that idea because early marriage usually helps to plan the future.
To begin with, the reason why I believe early wedding will help to plan the future since when people become cohabitees, they have to support each other. For instance, if couples have a plan to have children, they will have more opportunities to work hard and save money together for their family's future needs. In addition, it is a brilliant idea for cozy families to have infants before 30, the best time when the woman’s body is perfect and females also have a chance to work out and improve their bodies after a maternal period. Secondly, younger men are more energetic, this aspect is very helpful when men are involved in a child’s upbringing and they can spend much more time bonding with and taking care of their babies which will lead to happy prospective generations and families.
Another reason to support my belief is the truth that young people are more effective when they plan the future for their children. In other words, early marriage gives parents more chances to build strong finance for their child’s future as they will have more time for saving money. In contrast, a majority number of people who married after the age of 30 face financial burdens when they have children. Consequently, if people are able to support their children financially, the government’s burdens will be reduced.
In conclusion, it is obvious that this trend is through to be a positive development because marrying early help people raise healthy planned generations that are not dependent on the government for their educational needs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1490.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95016611296 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54999350199 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548172757475 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.2426716912 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.454545455 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3636363636 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8181818182 7.06120827912 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201085633571 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0923946486041 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640974459933 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1444914549 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386582317548 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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