It is sometimes said that people should be encouraged to get married before they are 30, as this is best both for the individual and for society.Do you agree or disagree?

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It is sometimes said that people should be encouraged to get married before they are 30, as this is best both for the individual and for society.
Do you agree or disagree?

it is argued that happiness is dependent on the amount of money we have. but others believe that money is the key lead to happiness. I agree with this idea but not completely.

money plays a significant role in our lives. it is obvious that we need money to pay for bills and buy essentials. In addition, we can use money to buy luxuries which we love, such as fashionable clothes in a special occasion or cinema tickets to entertain together with family and friends. therefore, I believe that the more money we have for a good standard of living" title="living">living the more comfortable and cheerful we are. For instance, bill Gates is a billionaire who founded Microsoft. His present life is affluence and comfortable with a smartest house in the world, monumental private aircraft, massive supercar collection.

Nevertheless, money is not the only factor to lead to happiness. For someone, they have a great family and some good friends who raise them up when they fail so they are happy. others said that they look for happiness through some works which contribute to community, especially help unlucky people and the old. To me, I very cheerful and comfortable when I have many great comic books and watch television all my free time without complain from my parents. therefore, there can be many factors that create happiness.

In conclusion, in my point of view, having a huge amount of money is a great thing however it is not the single factors which contribute to happiness. Everyone is different so the key to happiness of each person is different.

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IELTS Writing Task II - IELTS Academic

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...rtain together with family and friends. therefore, I believe that the more money we have ...
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... life is affluence and comfortable with a smartest house in the world, monumental...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, nevertheless, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1323.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93656716418 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18867899891 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559701492537 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.0751754818 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.6875 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.75 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10902882416 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0376699207181 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492234055809 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0591776611843 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472840720818 0.056905535591 83% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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