It is suggested that Everyone wants to have a car a television refrigerator, do disadvantages of the development for society outweigh the advantages?
It is stated that, people are likely to dream of having a car, TV and a refrigerator. I personally believe that even though these things have certain positive uses, the more it has critic points that causes serious issues and may not prove good deal in case of finance.
On the one hand, people nowadays are very committed towards their work and ought to be on time at at anywhere, car becomes the most effective mode to get out with, moreover, it becomes a symbol of status and reflects the standard of living of one’s and people do not have to rely on other mode of transport. Fridge keep food safe from contamination by regulating proper temperature and enhance the life of food. After exhausting day, television would become the effective way of entertainment, people may aware of current affairs and many other information about surrounding by TV and becomes the reason be with the family and spending good time with.
However, i believe it has more contradicts than benefits of having these facilities by the longtime so as, it need to maintain a car for the smooth running, which needs good money to get done and hence, it would take half of the saving of an individual’s. Car is a common source of emitting Carbon dioxide which is obviously harmful especially for the old age who are suffering from heart and respiratory disease CO2 also affects on children’s health as they have weak immunity then elders. Same way in case of fridge which releases CFC gas which does reaction with ozon gas and allow the ultraviolet rays to enter into earth’s atmosphere and cause serious skin diseases furthermore food which is stored long time in refrigerator may loses the nutrients and there is no value to consume that food.
Television makes people lazier and addicted to it, may cause obesity and eye related issues.
To conclude, because of this much disadvantages of these materials, it would not justice to human’s health if people gets completely depend on them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 96, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: at
...ards their work and ought to be on time at at anywhere, car becomes the most effectiv...
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Line 3, column 534, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun information seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much other information', 'a good deal of other information'.
Suggestion: much other information; a good deal of other information
...people may aware of current affairs and many other information about surrounding by TV and becomes the...
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Line 4, column 10, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... and spending good time with. However, i believe it has more contradicts than be...
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Line 4, column 180, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e smooth running, which needs good money to get done and hence, it would take hal...
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Line 6, column 30, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...d issues. To conclude, because of this much disadvantages of these materials, it wo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1643.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84660766962 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67439556591 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610619469027 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.6554346017 49.4020404114 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 164.3 106.682146367 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.9 20.7667163134 163% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121962528143 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0468160245503 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0298527189349 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0581510996807 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0270723546278 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 9.78957915832 179% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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