It is thought by some that its is better to live in a city while others believe that life is better in the countryside. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Deciding where to live is a subject of wide-range debate amongst society.While a group of people consider the country area as the ideal location, another Group of people find urban districts more suitable to inhabit.In my view, city life is ultimately superior to country life.
On the one hand, some tend to prefer settling in non-urban neighborhood for the undeniable tranquility it brings to mind. Faraway from the noisy throng of crowd and heavy traffic triggered by vehicles, rustics can relish the quiet surroundings, hearing only the soothing sound of birds singing and leaves falling from trees, and relax.As an example, according to results of a study conducted by scientists, a part of the brain associated with being in a calm, meditative state lit up when people were shown pictures of rural setting. Inhabiting in the country, one can revel in its serene environment and live a peaceful life.
On the other hand, despite the serenity and quietness countryside offers, many people opt for inner-city residency because of its convenience as the best medical care, education and job opportunities are available in major cities.by residing in city-center ,every destination and everything is within easy access via public transportation, a short drive or sometimes even a walking distance. For instance, in case of an emergency medical situation, one can get to the hospital or medical center accessible in the shortest period of time. Thus, one might desire to live in a metropolitan since it provide its inhabitants with a comfortable life.
There are different ideas regarding living places.some people are city dwellers whilst there are others who favor countrified regions to inhabit. In my opinion, living in large cities is far more preferable than living in small villages
- It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing school and going to university do the advantages of this outweight the disadvantages 95
- It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing school and going to university. do the advantages of this outweight the disadvantages? 89
- The diagram below shows changes to one university campus. 78
- It is thought by some that its is better to live in a city while others believe that life is better in the countryside. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. 84
- The diagram below shows changes to one university campus 89
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, so, thus, well, while, for instance, in my opinion, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1512.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26829268293 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93618464992 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655052264808 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 120.999642893 49.4020404114 245% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 168.0 106.682146367 157% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.8888888889 20.7667163134 154% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6666666667 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151059911939 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0697269647307 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472514000423 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0934713712944 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382790926425 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.3 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.55 50.2224549098 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.88 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.13 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.