It is true that disabled people encounter various difficulties in their lives in all corner of the world.
It is true that disabled people encounter various difficulties in their lives in all corner of the world. In this regard, authorities have to not only provide decent occupation but also succor them through giving tax deduction and providing additional facilities.
There are some people in any community unable to see, hear, or walk properly. However, normally, these citizens have special abilities which had better employ properly. For example, a blind person may have a melodious voice and he or she could perform a special task which matches their abilities such as being vocalists. In such a context, specific jobs should be provided for disabled people, which they can carry out according to their limitation. It is quite possible that they do a sedentary job if they cannot walk or do home working. Providing a decent job for them leads that they feel catered adequately in society.
There are other tactics which could be taken into account in order to assist and behave disabled people properly. As an illustration, the administrative system could give them a special tax deduction according to their financial condition and their disabilities. This may mitigate their financial problems to some extent. In addition to this, special facilities should be built for these residents, which alleviate their problems regarding their daily commute. For example, in the capital of my country, specific parkings have been constructed, which only disabled people are allowed to use and by parking their car there, they can commute to most parts of the city via a subway or bus.
To sum up, while governments seek help from benevolent organizations to provide facilities for disabled people, other measures including providing jobs, building specific facilities, and giving tax deduction should also be implemented in order to value this group.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2019-04-24 | Mohammad Khaleghi Esfahani | 78 | view |
- It is true to say that in the new millennium and due to the consumerism culture, some citizens borrow money in order to purchase various products and facilities which do not use and cost an arm and a leg sometimes. 78
- The bar chart compares the volume of smartphones and landlines per 100 people in seven nations. 78
- It is true to say that many industrialized nations allocate a great number of their health funds to purchase state of the art medical instruments. 78
- The two layouts demonstrate the changes which had happened in road access to a city hospital by 2010. 67
- In the new millennium and by the advent of the internet almost every sphere of human lives has been altered in some ways. 84
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, regarding, so, while, for example, in addition, such as, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1552.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26101694915 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75675556321 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572881355932 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.4072584208 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.857142857 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0714285714 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64285714286 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240963262251 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112866060247 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.248318480674 0.0667982634062 372% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175267893557 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.174291886295 0.056905535591 306% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.