Kathmandu (KTM) and Ulaanbaatar (UBN) are well-known capitals of Nepal and Mongolia respectively. KTM is located in the Himalaya mountain range, whereas UBN is located in the Central Asian plateau. Both capitals are located in Asia. UBN has a much larger size than KTM. UBN has 4.700 km2 in size, while KTM only has 50 km2. This report will compare several aspects of those two capitals. It will focus on climate, population, and transport.
KTM and UBN have several similarities and differences in climate. They both have a warm summer and nearly the same high average temperature ranging from 100 to 290. However, KTM has a mild winter and only cold nights, whereas in UBN it is very cold, dry and long. The low average temperature in UBN is much lower than in KTM. It is between -250 and 50 in UBN while it is 30 and 200 in KTM. The average rainfall in KTM is almost 5 times higher than in UBN. KTM’s average rainfall is 1.250 mm while UBN’s average rainfall is only 267 mm.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 4.0 24.0651302605 17% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 41.998997996 26% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 443.0 1615.20841683 27% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 103.0 315.596192385 33% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.30097087379 5.12529762239 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.18573250055 4.20363070211 76% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43292524978 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 62.0 176.041082164 35% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601941747573 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 132.3 506.74238477 26% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 15.8835044712 49.4020404114 32% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 63.2857142857 106.682146367 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 14.7142857143 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.85714285714 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235864681178 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131742760989 0.084324248473 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542474644416 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235864681178 0.151304729494 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.2 13.0946893788 47% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 50.2224549098 165% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 11.3001002004 46% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.07 12.4159519038 57% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.48 8.58950901804 75% => OK
difficult_words: 14.0 78.4519038076 18% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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