It is argued that the most optimal way to ameliorate the environment crises is that people of current generation should abandon their luxurious life style for the welfare of our descendants. I profoundly agree with this line of though because in order to conserve our environment people should alter modes of transport, standard of living and over dependence on machines.
To embark on,these are multifarious points to share up the plausible benefits of quiting lavish life style on the environment. Firstly, private transport is the predominant reason for the depletion of air, as they provide safe privacy ease and convenience. It is arduous for human to resist themselves and adopt public transportation system and education eco friendly. If this happens, we can save natural source which are non renewable and already scarce for future generations.as a positive consequences the quality of air which we en hale will improve upto a large extent.
Secondly, the other moot cause of global warming is deforestation because in order to accommodate ever burgeoning population and to widen to roads, we humans are cutting down trees at an unprecedented rate, results in extreme conditions ,thus,in order to save environment for our success, or we should accommodate ourselves in skyscraper and plant more trees. To exemplify, government of punjab recently launch "haryali"application for android uses, which facilate people to purchase different sorts of plants from nearby nurseries at no cost along with free home delivery which encourage people to give their contribution in saving environment.
Lastly, people should recede the usage of few home appliances such as, refrigeratores and air conditiones as both of these make our environment more hotter and contributation a lot to global warming so, people should limit the use of these machines. Other wise the excessive dependence can rip the warm out of our lives.
In conclusion, conspicuously the for going discussion propounds the view that present generation need to adopt life style changes to reduce environment issues. To make plants earthearth a better place to live in .by adopting few methods such as, reduce consumption, deforestation and over reliance machines.
- Many people these days have computer, laptops, telephones at their home for work. Do you think, working from home has more advantages or disadvantages? Give reasons. 56
- In many places the role of father and mother is changing. Do you think it’s a positive or negative development? 52
- The key to solve environmental problem is simple. The present generation should have less comfortable like for the sake of future generation. To what extend do you agree? 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: , these
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'consequence'?
Suggestion: consequence
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , in
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Use only 'hotter' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: hotter
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Message: Did you mean 'otherwise'?
Suggestion: Otherwise
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, thus, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 8.3376753507 288% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1900.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4441260745 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29697220153 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607449856734 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 605.7 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.2951588826 49.4020404114 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 158.333333333 106.682146367 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0833333333 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.91666666667 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103527721191 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0380939726458 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0248586372101 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0571624723713 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0181988874705 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 13.0946893788 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 50.2224549098 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.05 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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