Irrefutably, issues related to environment degradation escalating with large ratio. It is argued that in order to improve the quality of atmosphere multitudes should live less comfortable life for the benefit of upcoming generation. Although I agree with this notion, I suggest some other feasible remadies to ameliorate environment problem, in forthcoming paragraphs.
To commence with, nowadays a days air is getting frail day by day. To elucidate it, these days men and women both are a bread winners;therefore, they use private vehicles which have adverse effects on surrounding. To epitome, an article which was published in 'Globe and Mail ' newspaper revealed that in delhi, Capital of india where higher authority announced odd and even method to use vehicle so, odd number vehicle run only on odd days such as, 7,9,11.hence , this tactic assit to decrease pollution.
Moving further, government should ban plastic use. To elaborate it, plastic is not a biodegradable which cause a great harm to atmosphere. For instance, a program which was telecasted on BBC news revealed approximately 14 million tons of plastic became a major reason for the mortality of sea creature. As a result ,it impact on the natural beauty of ocean.
To recapitulate it, I would like to reaffirm that aforementioned reasons shows that no doubt convince of life is essential , but some collaboration are important for the future generation.
- The key to solving environmental problems is for the present generation to sacrifice their convenient life or live a less comfortable life for the sake of future generations To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
- Task 1 The chart below gives information about the age of women in Australia when they gave birth to their first child in 1966 1986 and 2006 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, therefore, for instance, no doubt, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1197.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 226.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29646017699 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13273051214 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.699115044248 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.9235106998 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.818181818 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5454545455 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.81818181818 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115332396575 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.040606459165 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632344973786 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0787770576743 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569409384931 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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