The first step to understand why road accidents are happens. Broadly speaking, there are some reasons for this. The first and foremost is the carelessness of drivers because they do not follow the trrafic rules properly while they are driving then, this carelessness is change in road accident. For instance, in india there are no defined driving tests for acuquring driving licence. Further, there is no lower age limited defined for driving. However, in others countries like USA, there are many strict rules of driving test required for license.Statistically, it conformed that the numbers of road accidents in USA is 40 percent less then in india.
Secondly, it is believed that goveronment should be allowcate the money to maintance the road properly and take a strict rules for carelessness drivers and panalize to these drivers. Moteover, the license must be suspended for long term and goveronment must be banned on illegal way of license made by defective companies. In other way, driving test must be compulsory for all new and freash drivers. For example, under the eighteen year children cannot apply a driving license.
To conculate, i would like to say that goveronment should have to implicate sum strict laws regarding driving and people have to follow these rules and regulation.
- The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia’s share of the Japanese tourist market.Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. 73
- Many people believe that cooking is an essential life skill and should be taught to boys and girls in schools Others disagree and believe it is a waste of school time Discuss both views and give your opinion 66
- The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002. 73
- The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries.Cambridge 6 test 1 task 1 73
- The diagram describes the production of canned fruit. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 549, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Statistically
...es of driving test required for license.Statistically, it conformed that the numbers of road ...
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Line 1, column 638, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[2]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...oad accidents in USA is 40 percent less then in india. Secondly, it is believed t...
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Line 3, column 122, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'rule'?
Suggestion: rule
...nce the road properly and take a strict rules for carelessness drivers and panalize t...
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Line 4, column 15, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...apply a driving license. To conculate, i would like to say that goveronment shou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, while, broadly speaking, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1090.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 211.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16587677725 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.859269633 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578199052133 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 341.1 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.8343180703 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0909090909 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1818181818 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.54545454545 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112908480789 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0484875995825 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0698300130309 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0665254941637 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0588988826966 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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