The last two decades have seen enormous changes in the way people’s lives are affected by IT, with many
advances in this field. However, while these technological advances have brought many benefits to the world,
it can be argued that these developments in IT will result in more negative impacts than positive.
The last two decades have seen enormous changes in the way people’s lives are affected by IT, with many
advances in this field. However, while these technological advances have brought many benefits to the world,
it can be argued that these developments in IT will result in more negative impacts than positive.
To begin, email has made communication, especially abroad, much simpler and faster, resulting in numerous
benefits for commerce and business. Furthermore, the World Wide Web means that information on every
conceivable subject is now available to us. For example, people can access news, medical advice, online
education courses and much more via the internet. It is evident that these improvements have made life far
easier and more convenient for large numbers of people and will continue to do so for decades to come.
Nevertheless, the effects of this new technology have not all been beneficial. For example, many people feel
that the widespread use of email is destroying traditional forms of communication such as letter writing,
telephone and face-to-face conversation. This could result in a decline in people’s basic ability to socialize and
interact with each other on a day-to-day basis.
In addition, the large size of the Web has meant that it is nearly impossible to regulate and control. This has led
to many concerns regarding children accessing unsuitable websites and viruses. Unfortunately, this kind of
problem might even get worse in the future at least until more regulated systems are set up.
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular activity in 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 61
- The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the man features, and make comparisons where relevant. 61
- Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of mony. Others argue that it is better o try and improve such situations.Discuss both these views and give your opinion. 56
- Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion. 56
- The plans below show the layout of a university's sports center now, and how it will look after redevelopment.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 67
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, regarding, so, while, at least, for example, in addition, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1324.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38211382114 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96412551278 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646341463415 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.7895641507 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.333333333 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 15.0 4.38176352705 342% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.425422050057 0.244688304435 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132634472727 0.084324248473 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.188983541756 0.0667982634062 283% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120938737558 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.172984312498 0.056905535591 304% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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