Leaders and directors in an organization normally oler people.some people think younger leader would be better.do you agree or disagree?
Writing 1
Leading an organization would be difficult by people these days. Some people believe that the elderly are more suitable to direct a company while in my opinion it is better providing a chance to the young to navigate a big company.
First of all, graduated people are more enthusiastic about an important job so there is a high level if energy to improve themselves. Not only have the younger adequate knowledge but also learned new method and strategy at university in terms of the major. Although providing some opportunities for unexperienced people is hard, it could be possible.
On the other hand, aged members gained high experiences during their work. Therefore solving a problem would be less difficult and the staff members will respect their ideas. While utilizing new technology and information is necessary to pass a challenge today. They persist to make a use of the result of old experience in the past because of the low-level of taking risk.
By way of conclusion, I believe that new programs specially in big organization need update information instead of ineffective experience so significant place mentioned have to be given generous young people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, therefore, thus, while, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1000.0 1615.20841683 62% => OK
No of words: 194.0 315.596192385 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15463917526 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91747112987 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.664948453608 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 324.9 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4173230187 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.0 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.6 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15249877898 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0567236384232 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597570037526 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0912771861979 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.049532721033 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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