learning English at school is often seen is more important than learning local languages. if these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to insure the survival of local languages and, if so , how?
There is no doubt these days that English language is the first language in the world. The question is how learn English language at school is more important than native languages and how we can save the local languages. In this essay I'm going to give some reasons why should people learn English language and show my opinion about saving the local languages.
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In terms of causes, learning English language will help people to get a good job and give them many benefits such as a good salary. For example: in one year ago I worked in elementary school as a history teacher and they gave me a 3000 SR I worked hard and my salary was not enough so, I decided to leave the school, after that I searched for other jobs and all of them asked me if I have English language so from that moment I made decision to learn English for 6 months and then I want to the same school , they except me in addition, they gave me a 6000 SR because I have English Language Certificate for 6 months. In other words, It is so important that the government should support their people to learn English language.
The other reason is learn English language will give you a chance to travel around the world and explore it without helping from anyone, so from my experience English language give me more confidence in myself to travel alone and let me be leader of my family when they decide to take a tour around the world or visit any countries.
To sum up, in my opinion people should learn English language if they want a better life. However, the government should keep going to save the local languages by teaching their languages in all levels of the education also, to preserve the identity of the country,
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- learning English at school is often seen is more important than learning local languages. if these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to insure the survival of local 56
- learning English at school is often seen is more important than learning local languages. if these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to insure the survival of local 56
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1393.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4935483871 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33813388604 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506451612903 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 126.410950455 49.4020404114 256% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 154.777777778 106.682146367 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.4444444444 20.7667163134 166% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.4444444444 7.06120827912 190% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291295849536 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154105338967 0.084324248473 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0875888275167 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188307158323 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.090195714644 0.056905535591 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.89 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.