Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not thaught, many are at risk of dying out.
In your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure the survival of local language and, if so, how?
Nowdays, in most schools around globe teaching English as first language is becoming more popular before, Also learning this particular language is more common in contrast to the past, while there are lot of concerns that focusing on just one language in school cause extinction of local language. English is unit language for people with different nationalities to communicate, furthermore is first language of science which scientists and artist who want to gain fame and show value of their work to establish it in english,hence in my point of view it is important for peopletolearn this widely known language.Despit importaceof english other languages are very important ,and most be structures to keep traditional and uniqe languages alive such as make them a compulsory field in schools from first grade to last year of university , moreover encouraging especially young generation to learn how valuable this languages are.
First popular language which high rate of earth population speak is Chinese but most of Chinese scientists and companies who want to grab attention of world are using english language and that shows how essential is for people to learn this language. Maybe English it is not very important for residents of one non-country but if they want to communicate with rest of the world it's important to learn.This language help people to have to access to wide range of books and science sources without having problems in to learn other languages just to read one book. So having knowledge in english is skill of every person and it is important for people in modern world to learn.
Although English is very important but that would cause people to forget about their language and reduce it's value in one country , what makes every countries uniqe from others is the cultures and Language is part of people's cultures which effects on art of nature such as music,in addition there must be firm structure for people to care about their language such as making those language compulsory in education system and also celebrating traditional festival of the country which contains music and poems would help people to recognise their language.
In conclusion, learning english is becoming essential for the people and other languages are reducing their value,so it is important to keep those languages alive because they are beauty of different nations, and learning english along side other languages help people to be more skillful.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, may, moreover, so, while, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2077.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 399.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20551378446 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70505869693 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.47619047619 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 640.8 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 57.0 20.2975951904 281% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 167.092666457 49.4020404114 338% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 296.714285714 106.682146367 278% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 57.0 20.7667163134 274% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 18.8571428571 7.06120827912 267% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195293774917 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133981642789 0.084324248473 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496630331594 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146157261921 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0600328776389 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.6 13.0946893788 241% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 13.62 50.2224549098 27% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.5 11.3001002004 226% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.83 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 9.78957915832 291% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.8 10.1190380762 245% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.