Life in the 21st century is better than the previous century. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons and support with relevant examples.
Gone are the days when lifestyle was much simpler but at present, the journey of human beings from forest survival to victory over moon speaks the story of a massive success of mankind. On account of this, life is believed to be much superior in this century as compare to last century. Here, I would like to accord with the given statement at a larger extent.
There are manifold points to shore up my point of view. First and foremost, unlike past, human lifestyle is pampered in the lap of technology. To demonstrate, nowadays, advanced technical inventions such as 4G mobile phone, latest computers, internet and television are contributing remarkably to uplift the standard of work, education, business and trade worldwide. Doing work much faster than ever before with greater accuracy, building up commercial network, transferring data, money transactions, online billing, shopping and education has been possible due to the existence of such inventions. By contrast, in previous century, such inventions were not so advanced and people were not benefited with the fast services. Thus, life is supposed to be much comfortable and luxury in current century.
Further emphasizing on my point of view, in this modern era, the treatments of some fatal ailments such as cancer, aids, TB have been discovered by the medical teams to save the lives of patients. Whereas, in the former century, people were dying out in the absence of such cures. At present, globlization is spreading its roots and therefore the nations of whole world are interested in developing social, commercial, political and cultural relationships. Consequently, global friendships growing in the entire globe are leading to a great development in the fields of business, education, technology, sports, trade and so on. On the contrary, opposite wind is also there.
To commence with, in the previous century, people had quality lifestyle as there were no problems of pollution, global warming, traffic and health. While, in 21st century, the concerns related to environment, health and lifestyle are on the elevation and the quality of lifestyle is being degraded enormously. To be specific, every year, rising level of temperature is resulting into melting of glaciers as a consequence, floods, tsunami and other natural calamities are occurring frequently, leading to mass destruction and loss of property. The concerns of air pollution, traffic, crowd, noise and inflation have also got on nerves of people. Ultimately, the superiority of lifestyle is getting to be inferior.
To recapitulate, undeniably, human beings are witnessing some severe problems in this modern context. However, the lifestyle is facilitated significantly and can be considered better than the former age.
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Essay evaluation report
Sentence: On account of this, life is believed to be much superior in this century as compare to last century.
Description: A conjunction, subordinating is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to as and compare
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flaws:
More relative clauses and more adverbial clause wanted.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 21 15
No. of Words: 434 350
No. of Characters: 2245 1500
No. of Different Words: 248 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.564 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.173 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.821 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 180 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 142 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 101 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 64 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.667 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.47 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.619 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.264 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.492 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.019 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
What should i write and when
What should i write and when i need to write as compare to
As compared to ???
As compared with ???
'As compared to' or 'As
'As compared to' or 'As compared with' both are fine.
Use "compared with" when you are looking for differences.
Use "compared to" when highlighting (or comparing) the similarities of one thing to another.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 6, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
Gone are the days when lifestyle was much simple...
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Line 5, column 223, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the latest'.
Suggestion: , the latest
...nical inventions such as 4G mobile phone, latest computers, internet and television are ...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Further,
...table and luxury in current century. Further emphasizing on my point of view, in thi...
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Line 9, column 230, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ted to environment, health and lifestyle are on the elevation and the quality of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, so, therefore, thus, whereas, while, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 13.1623246493 228% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 76.0 41.998997996 181% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2339.0 1615.20841683 145% => OK
No of words: 434.0 315.596192385 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38940092166 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56428161445 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96673012062 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 258.0 176.041082164 147% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594470046083 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 735.3 506.74238477 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 4.76152304609 294% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.6192603764 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.380952381 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.04761904762 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121222327259 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0334451524886 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0405194699411 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0620585649287 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0297937492909 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 137.0 78.4519038076 175% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.