Moving to big cities is the popular trend over the world. It is easier to find a job, girlfriend, active life and high education. Besides, people who living in such cities have to do many kinds of job, working overtime in order to survive. In addition, they also face many problems like transportation and healthy.
As far as you know, the over-crowded cities in each developing country include itself traffic jam, air pollution, garbage and unsafe food. People always want to do by their way and do not respect any common law. Imagine that, if everybody in Bejing Capital throws garbage out in right way, vegetable and fruit are always checked carefully before it is in any supermarket or store, all company around this city stopped working. Hence, it means to have no effect on people health. Less patient comes in a hospital, then in there, the other can be taken care of well without waiting many hours. But that is a daydreaming and real situation is totally opposed to it.
Nowadays, what exact things have people's health concerned in those big cities? In order to reach a better life, they have to pay an expensive price for that: Healthy. Day after day, people do not recognize that their health is worse more and more. When they passively understand the problems going on their body, everything is too late.
The main problems are that residents in those cities need to earn enough money as they need and they always willing to spend almost time for this. Working hard during a week and take a rest without any improving their-self. Hanging out and meet up with their friends, drinking beer or wine to "make acquaintance" with someone or even go shopping to relax.
There are many ways to relax that not only improve knowledge but also build a strong healthy. For instance, you can register a dancing class, go swimming pool, work out every two or three days each week. It will help you have a better spirit to bear with any challenges in city's life. Otherwise, you can keep learning English to find a better job in a fresh environment in another developed country where your company respect the environment and encourage staffs to protect their health.
In shortly, Healthy in on your management, you have to charge in on it by your self with you any compliant before you can change your city.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, if, so, then, well, for instance, in addition, in short, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1915.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 404.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7400990099 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4936875015 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 176.041082164 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596534653465 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 594.0 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.571864375 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0454545455 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3636363636 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.18181818182 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248516289489 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0649255891447 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057452103578 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121884057943 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0206984932947 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.