Nowadays some people believe in negative impact of living in metropolitan cities to our wellbeing. I'm agree with this thesis and in this essay I will state my opinion and support it with examples.
In modern age we live, our society is exposed to extreme level of stress than ever before in human history. More and more people move to big cities to save large amount of their time traveling to work. Young and productive population seeking their new home in metropolitan condos located in central business district, where is lack of parks and green environment. Lack of nature in our life decrease level of serotonin, what is essential brain hormone, so called "hormone of happiness". Grey buildings and everywhere presented neon lights also have massive impact to our subconscious, due to this, people are more likely depressed and committing suicide.
Live in metropolitan city follows with everywhere presented noise, smog and other pollution. It is scientifically proved, that exhausted gases contains high amount of toxins affecting humans wellbeing and case illnesses such a cancer or pulmonary heart disease. People are exposed into polluted environment every day and with their busy life, its less likely they will travel to country side or mountains for a weekends as big cities are located far away from natural areas.
To sum up, I'm strongly agree with fact of negative impact of living in big cities to our health. Environment to what is our body exposed every day enormously affect our mental health as our body heath.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1298.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13043478261 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75570333267 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628458498024 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4038301041 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.166666667 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0833333333 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.41666666667 7.06120827912 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223314228291 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0849212051323 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0777825976941 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139708761726 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375694605242 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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