Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problem, as well as practical problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Yes language difference is a big problem in social development. When we visit the other country like Turkey. Their local language use the Persian or Pharce. Turkey have a Muslim country but the people of turkey fallows the European lifestyle. When a visitor go their he face maney problems.
• Who can find the job
• Build relation
• Shop keeper speaking issue
• Culture and social lifestyle difference
A person is visiting the other country like the Turkey their he face first problem language. Language is key role play in solving the issued. If a person is well knows as about local language then local people to communicate easy and get good information and quick repons.
Turkey is modern Muslim country. Their people living standred is best alternative other Muslim country. So when any body is visited their as a country he face some local issue. Most of visitor take helps their local people or guider and making their visit successfully. Other side when a visitor wants the job he is not understand the local language so it a problems. Who can he finds the issue and complete the job project and their solution. Culture is also can effect the other life changer as well eliment.
o Local job finding issue?
o Local purchasing issue?
o Personal development issue?
o Study issue /
These are some local language issue.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 65, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...is a big problem in social development. When we visit the other country like Turkey....
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Line 1, column 165, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...guage use the Persian or Pharce. Turkey have a Muslim country but the people of turk...
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Line 1, column 165, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Turkey) must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...guage use the Persian or Pharce. Turkey have a Muslim country but the people of turk...
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Line 1, column 244, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... turkey fallows the European lifestyle. When a visitor go their he face maney proble...
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Line 1, column 271, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'faces'.
Suggestion: faces
...n lifestyle. When a visitor go their he face maney problems. • Who can find the job...
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'faces'.
Suggestion: faces
... other country like the Turkey their he face first problem language. Language is key...
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Line 7, column 62, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the best'.
Suggestion: is the best
...m country. Their people living standred is best alternative other Muslim country. So w...
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Line 7, column 113, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'anybody'?
Suggestion: anybody
...ernative other Muslim country. So when any body is visited their as a country he face s...
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Line 7, column 155, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'faces'.
Suggestion: faces
...y body is visited their as a country he face some local issue. Most of visitor take ...
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Line 7, column 321, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'understood'.
Suggestion: understood
... when a visitor wants the job he is not understand the local language so it a problems. Wh...
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Line 7, column 357, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a problem' or simply 'problems'?
Suggestion: a problem; problems
...not understand the local language so it a problems. Who can he finds the issue and complet...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: O
...he other life changer as well eliment. o Local job finding issue? o Local purch...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: O
...l eliment. o Local job finding issue? o Local purchasing issue? o Personal dev...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: O
...ding issue? o Local purchasing issue? o Personal development issue? o Study is...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ding issue? o Local purchasing issue? o Personal development issue? o Study is...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: O
... issue? o Personal development issue? o Study issue / These are some local lan...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... issue? o Personal development issue? o Study issue / These are some local lan...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 41.998997996 19% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1130.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 229.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93449781659 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44871788527 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 176.041082164 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515283842795 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 350.1 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.3709120388 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.4736842105 106.682146367 56% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.0526315789 20.7667163134 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.89473684211 7.06120827912 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.38176352705 228% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113060248541 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.039093848195 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429922109059 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0469687053661 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0384400628165 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 13.0946893788 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 50.2224549098 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.43 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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