Settling in new country where we have to communicate in overseas language can cause significant social and practical problems. I personally agree with this statement that it can lead to social and practical issues.
Firstly, this is because language is essential in helping someone to blend with local people. If someone does not know about what locals are saying, it will be so hard to create and maintain relationship with them, and even to initiate a conversation. For instance, an Indonesian moves to Taiwan but does not understand local people's language, Mandarin Chinese. As a result, it will be challenging for him to connect and communicate with them. Finally, this will lead to other problem where he will feel socially isolated.
Secondly, language is important in making people connect with the environment around them. If one does not understand foreign language, it will be so challenging for him to even understand what is happening around him. For example, an Italian moves to a city in Indonesia, where most public transportation use Indonesia language. Because he does not understand Bahasa Indonesia, he finds it difficult to connect with the Indonesia environment.
In conclusion, living abroad where you have to speak foreign language can cause both practical and social problems, because language is essential in helping someone to blend with local people and language is important in making people connect with the environment around them.
- Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 67
- Nowadays many people choose to be self employed rather than to work for a company or organization Why might this be the case What could be the disadvantages of being self employed 61
- Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices To what extent do you agree or disagree Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge 56
- The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 61
- Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using 'the surrounding environment'?
Suggestion: the surrounding environment
...important in making people connect with the environment around them. If one does not understand foreign lan...
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Line 7, column 196, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g someone to blend with local people and language is important in making people c...
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Line 7, column 250, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding environment'?
Suggestion: the surrounding environment
...important in making people connect with the environment around them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1238.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 233.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31330472103 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86688211473 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 176.041082164 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.49356223176 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 385.2 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.9379972232 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.166666667 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4166666667 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.08333333333 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290092706413 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107948409186 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104172562216 0.0667982634062 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210126025711 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121098994954 0.056905535591 213% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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