Currently, the number of young generations are more than older generations in certain countries. This essay will explain that the advantages of this situation do not outweigh the disadvantages.
Young people are generally more stronger and healthier than older people because they are currently living in the peak of human condition. This is different from older people who have passed the peak phase, thus making them not as strong and as healthy as younger people. Consequently, younger people tend to be more productive because their body make it possible for them to do a lot of productive activities. A lot of them will be productive workforce in the workplace, which then will make a positive impact to the country's economy condition. Moreover, many new inventions will also emerge as young people also tend to be more creative than older people.
However, young people tend to be lazier and effortless if compared than old people. This is because they live in an era where everything has already been convenient as a result of the rapid development of technology. The rapid development of technology has ease them to do everything without making a lot of efforts. As a result, instead of being more productive, younger people being less productive and too lazy to work. This affects negatively to the country, mainly to country's economy. For instance, Niger is known as a country which has large population of young people. Because of their laziness, Niger is counted as one of the poorest country in the world.
In conclusion, although young people are generally more stronger and healthier than older people, they tend to be lazier and effortless if compared than old people, which will not make them to be productive. As a result, the advantages of having more young people than old people do not outweigh the disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 28, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'stronger' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: stronger
...antages. Young people are generally more stronger and healthier than older people because...
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Line 7, column 52, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'stronger' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: stronger
...on, although young people are generally more stronger and healthier than older people, they t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, however, if, moreover, so, then, thus, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1539.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04590163934 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79577367529 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.432786885246 0.561755894193 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.2218869714 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.1875 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0625 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1875 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209072657894 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0845248942043 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532071421351 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158347824482 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420775212182 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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