Sometimes we have to live in a country where we have to use nonnative language. Some people believe that this situation will make problems in both social and practical matters. I completely agree with the statement and will explain the reasons.
Firstly, language is needed to communicate something, whether it is a long or short conversation. This is because language serves as communication barrier between people. Hence, not knowing the language that most people speak will cause serious social problems. For example, John just moved from United States to Japan where most people speak in Japanese. Because he does not understand Japanese, he finds difficulty in blending in with people in his neighborhood, and also with his co-workers in the office. As a result, John feel isolated and lonely in Japan.
Secondly, language can not be separated from any daily activity. All of our daily activities, from buying public transportation ticket to ordering food menu involve using language. Thus, if someone does not know language that is mostly used in a country, his daily activities will be hampered. For instance, Judah moved from United Kingdom to Taiwan, where the language that is used the most is Mandarin Chinese. When Judah comes to a restaurant, he finds it difficult to order a food because all of the food menus are written in Mandarin Chinese. As a result, he finds practical issue because his daily activity is hampered.
In conclusion, I completely agree that having to speak in a language that is not our mother language will cause both issues in social and practical matters because language is needed to communicate something, and language can not be separated from any daily activity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 494, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...ds it difficult to order a food because all of the food menus are written in Mandarin Chin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1433.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11785714286 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74865226715 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492857142857 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.1219385178 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5625 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221520584776 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.073237202619 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635584862841 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16093670492 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0787952414858 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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