The pictures below show the design of University Sports Centre at the present and future time. Overall, it can be seen that there will be expansion of the building in the future. In addition, there will also be construction of new facilities.
Currently, the main building has two Outdoor Courts, which are located in the West and East side of the building. In the center of building there is a 25-m-Pool which is surrounded by other facilities. Those facilities are Changing Room, Gym, Seating facility, and Reception, which are situated on the West, North, East and South side of the University Sports Centre, respectively.
In the future, the main building will be expanded, which cause the demolition of two Outdoor Courts. New facilities will be constructed in the new area, without removing the old facilities. Instead, some old facilities such as Gym and Reception will be enlarged. On the west side of the building, there will be construction of Leisure Pool, new Changing Room, and also Sports shop, which is located in the Reception area. Whereas on the east side of building, the building of new facilities will include two Dance studios, Sports Hall, another Changing Room and also Cafe, which is situated in the Reception area.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, whereas, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1040.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 207.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02415458937 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7035104409 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.463768115942 0.547539520022 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 311.4 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.9486108282 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5454545455 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8181818182 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.54545454545 5.23603664747 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131074829998 0.215688989381 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0634875329544 0.103423049105 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682789000095 0.0843802449381 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108996076446 0.15604864568 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0683698031909 0.0819641961636 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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