Learning to speak a different language is never easy, and even when you master it does not mean you can live in an environment that everybody say that as their language. I personally believe that this not only caused severe social problems, but also result in daily life issue as a whole.
In my opinion, there are hundreds of problems developed while you live in another country where speak foreign language. In terms of society, I believe that the biggest difficult is communication, because obviously, the language you are saying is not your mother tongue language. Without the same saying, you might be isolated in public gathering, it is because language barrier might be a factor that prevent you from making friends in the region. My cousin, for example, who is Vietnamese, now living in London, only have some Vietnamese friends there because it is hard for her to understand local ones.
I also think that living in foreign countries has a lot of practical problems that happen on our daily basis. As you have known, different languages more or less means different cultures, this lead to some misunderstanding that sometimes embarrassed you. Moreover, some people find it difficult to access local transport or go to the local supermarket or even eat in a local restaurant, because of language barrier again. In offices, I think this is the worst, people can not freely express their feeling due to the fact that they always have to struggle with words, therefore, they can not find something that could say their opinions, this has considerable effects on the possibilities of promotion at work.
In conclusion, I would argue that a lot of problems from daily issue to social issues can develop when you choose to live in another countries that speak different languages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 157, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun means is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...have known, different languages more or less means different cultures, this lead to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion, more or less
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1488.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72315176873 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536666666667 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.540827201 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.272727273 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2727272727 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0909090909 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319665393064 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122978714466 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637776960378 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196349963365 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0215436325122 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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