Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Some people believe that practical issues and major social problems can be caused by living in a nation in which we must speak foreign language. I strongly disagree with this opinion because of effect of environment and nature of communication.
People who live in another country used to speak like the inhabitants of there. They are always involved by this part of social life and as we learned speaking in our country because of the environment, we learn it easily anywhere else and we can use it in our social life with our friends or co-workers.
In addition, making connection with others is a skill with a definite structure. There are a variety of different books which are written to improve our communication skills, helping us to have better relationships. These books teach us how to behave in different situations and what we should to say in different conditions. Therefore, it’s not important whether we talk with our mother tongue or not. We just need to follow the clear structures of communication.
Some may argue that we usually do not have much time to learn foreign languages and cannot be good at it so that social life and practical issues can be occurred. However, I believe that learning a foreign language in its own environment is much easier and after some months, it wouldn't be a big deal for us to speak and we can manage our social and practical life. I also think that a lot of educational video clips in different subjects on the web could be beneficial for us in order to ease this difficulty.
In conclusion, I believe that because of speaking in another country, social and practical problems will not happen since the environment and structures of communication play an active role in this subject.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 152, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to speak'.
Suggestion: to speak
...s part of social life and as we learned speaking in our country because of the environme...
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Line 7, column 10, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'argues'.
Suggestion: argues
...structures of communication. Some may argue that we usually do not have much time t...
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Line 7, column 280, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...s much easier and after some months, it wouldnt be a big deal for us to speak and we ca...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, therefore, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1453.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84333333333 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83383524966 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533333333333 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7380749774 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.769230769 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0769230769 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210458702787 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0758777421754 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515084827373 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125111147015 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0515533327632 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.