In terms of globalization, a large number of people is willing to move to another country, hoping that a knowledge of a local language will help them to adapt. However, the others think that it can tend to several cultural issues which are usually not expected. I concur that the communication in not your mother tongue is not so convenient as it seemed to be.
There are some points for this statement. First of all, the foreigners can easily brother the citizens' feelings by using the words in the inappropriate way. In some conservative nations there are strict rules in the conversations with elder generation. The casual phrase which is common in your Motherland can easily hurt the locals.
Moreover, there are always unwritten rules in the talk topics. While the developed countries are famous for the freedom of speech, we can still face with various aggression to personal discourses in the not developed ones. For instance, saying aloud about your political position, you can be arrested by the police as the people in that region are not used to express own opinions the publicity.
In contrast, certain people claim that due to globalization trend most of society doings are well-known and lead to multinational etiquette. They say that social networks and Hollywood films have made all cultures more close to each other and have invented rules which are similar in all regions.
All in all, the movement to other country is not always slight, obtaining a countless number of the underlying potential problems. Some nations still have appropriate behavior which is essential to follow. To my mind, even if the country is seemed to be modern and your knowledge of the language are on the high level, it is better to get known about the society more to avoid the embarrassing situations
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
In terms of globalization, a large numbe...
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Line 2, column 28, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
In terms of globalization, a large number of people is willing to move to another co...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, so, still, well, while, for instance, in contrast, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1508.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97689768977 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73163673523 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57095709571 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4739257742 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.533333333 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150241449158 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0398987822618 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0281623839108 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0743931798671 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0206519791007 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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