Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
<h3 style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; line-height: 115%; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial; vertical-align: baseline;"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:
115%;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;mso-ansi-language:EN-US;font-weight:normal;
mso-bidi-font-weight:bold">Nowadays, as immigration becoming a usual way for
seek better life, there are some obstacle that people have to overcome. First
and main barrier in living a strange place is to speak foreign language,
however, it could not be unsolved situation with restricted cultural
possibility due to the fact language perception will be simply when living with
native speakers and via modern technologies. At my standpoint, social
difference is not challenging and the following essay will outline suggestions
in favor to the statement.</span></h3><h3 style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; line-height: 115%; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial; vertical-align: baseline;"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:
115%;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;mso-ansi-language:EN-US;font-weight:normal;
mso-bidi-font-weight:bold">Primarily, before going to live another country,
taking a short-term course makes adaptation comfortable and enable to meet with
daily questions. Furthermore, when people attend to live foreign country, he or
she have to speak with ambassador of unknown country, which puts obligation to
survey important aspect of culture, as a result, it gives a significant
experience when struggling with forthcoming practical moments.</span></h3><h3 style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; line-height: 115%; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial; vertical-align: baseline;"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:
115%;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;mso-ansi-language:EN-US;font-weight:normal;
mso-bidi-font-weight:bold">Besides, there could be spontaneous situation that
force people to live or immigrate another land immediately. For example,
rotation in working place, job offer or related with health issues. Admittedly,
such condition can be complicated problem to whom first time changes accommodation.
Regardless of that fact, using modern technologies, this quietly be soluble so
that, there a lot of guide applications and translators in smartphones. Moreover,
some people believe that talking with native speaker allows to handle traditional
problems.<o:p></o:p></span></h3><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:107%;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;
mso-fareast-font-family:Calibri;color:black;mso-ansi-language:EN-US;mso-fareast-language:
RU;mso-bidi-language:AR-SA">Overall, it can be concluded that not being able to
speak in foreign country may appear some difficulties and unpleasant situation.
Nevertheless, dealing with language barrier is temporary and possible to
handle.</span>
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, for example, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3177.0 1615.20841683 197% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 9.45535714286 5.12529762239 184% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 12.2470057282 2.80592935109 436% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565476190476 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 824.4 506.74238477 163% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.5 1.60771543086 156% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.2975951904 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 298.721390489 49.4020404114 605% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 353.0 106.682146367 331% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 37.3333333333 20.7667163134 180% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 30.0 4.38176352705 685% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0651500884494 0.244688304435 27% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0456453815501 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0320080673971 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0315026257849 0.151304729494 21% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340280722759 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 41.8 13.0946893788 319% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -42.22 50.2224549098 -84% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 28.3 11.3001002004 250% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 38.18 12.4159519038 308% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.22 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 22.0 9.78957915832 225% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.1190380762 166% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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