Nowadays, many people are migrating to other countires for several reasons, mainly for increasing their life standards, taking good educations, working in good conditions...These are the advantages of living in foreign countries that have good reputations. But also, there are some drawbacks. For example, when you go to the foreign countires to live, firstly you must know the language very well that is spoken by loyal people. I think that language differences cause lots of problems like social problems and practical problems. That's why, I fully aggree that residing in foreign country where people have to speak a foreign language will cause social and practical problems because of some reasons that ı will mention in my essay.
First and foremost, communication is very importat for all mankind. People can not work in harmony, otherwise they understand each other clearly. For example, many students are goingt to foreign countries to take better education and to improve their knowledge on the fields they are studying at. But they force themselves a lot to understand lectures and sometimes even though they are doing their best in lectures, there can be some misunderstandings. The students can not do what the teachers want them to do although the students want to perform their tasks in well condition because of not clearly understand what the teachers said. These cause students to lose their confidence.
The countries like Germany, France, America have powerful, strength industries and people living in other countires are constantly trying to go to these type of countiries to find jobs and to work. Later on, the governments of these countries realise that employees that come from other countries is facing lots of problemsand on the other hand, they can cause lots of problems. They face with new culture, new language, new inhabitants... Time to get used to live in foreign countiries are increasing permannetly for people they can not speak the foreign language. Employees don't know the language and they can not clarify themselves clearly. The people who can't clarify tehmselves are seem the potential candidates that they can be detrimental to citizens. Because they think that their physcoholgies definitely will be influenced by this situation.
As a conclusion, residing in countries where you have to speak foreign languages will cause problems. That's why it is more important to learn second foreign language before going.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Suggestion: to second
...Thats why it is more important to learn second foreign language before going.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, so, well, for example, i think, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2074.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 392.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29081632653 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8466278815 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.489795918367 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 615.6 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.0596891139 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.7 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317082328419 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0936941100094 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0978070602026 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217429429203 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.090684206445 0.056905535591 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.