Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.
In our modern world, there is an increasing trend of immigration to foreign countries where language is considered the biggest obstacle. There is a wide variety of controversies about this problem, in my viewpoint, language barrier can result in society issues as well as negative impacts on development of individuals and enterprises.
First and foremost, the reason I support for this view is that due to the language difference, people can meet some troubles in communication with local residents. It particularly happens in the organizations in which most people are under high pressure to complete their tasks on tight schedule. Hence, lack of understanding because of different foreign language may cause time-consuming operation and reduce others' productivity. For example, in terms of an urgent task, although foreign employees do not understand deeply what the boss said, they do not confirm and complete the assigned tasks which are not as relevant as requirements. This can break the commitment to customers and destroy the company reputation through the eyes of clients.
On the other hand, living in other nations usually leads to a multitude of social issues. Some international students find it difficult absorbing knowledge in their schools and gradually lose their confidence. Moreover, they are also prone to have a pessimist views about life, and as a result, their potential ability is unable to unlock. It is obvious that in the developed countries such as Germany, America, or France, there is a high rate of foreign people working in mechanical fields or software programs since they do not require a high level of language proficiency. In addition, immigrants regularly have the difficulty in speaking foreign language and this is the most popular reason that makes them feel tough to express their ideas or extend their network. The weak-minded foreigners are likely to have negative thinking and separate them from the society, even worse, they can have serious psychology diseases such as anxiety, feeling of isolation, and irritability.
In conclusion, I personally agree that language barriers can significantly deteriorate individual communication, increase drawbacks to business and human development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, if, may, moreover, so, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1902.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49710982659 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06549727571 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595375722543 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 593.1 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.727422729 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.857142857 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7142857143 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9285714286 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226538818026 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0676294545728 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0347761981945 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123177093753 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0269231764474 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.03 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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