Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign languga can cause serious social problems, as well as pratical problems.
To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In the modern world with the expeditious pace of the globalization, more and more people can live,study and work abroad. Some people think that this cause some solemn problems in society when communication by using foreign language . i partly agree with this statement. In this essay, i would like to mention about the negative and positive of speaking other language when living in other country.
On the one hand, living aboard bring us a large number of advantages . Firstly, we can widen knowledge about new culture, new lifestyle, new customs ,... and discovery new things that we have never known before. Secondly, this is not help we widen knowledge but also give them more chances to make international friends from that our relationship will be more extensive. For instance, you are a study aboard student in Finland and you can speak both English and Finnish, it is easy for you to make friend with native and international people. Finally, when you study a new language, you will help more opportunities to advance in the future , more language more successes, so that it is convenient for you to contact fluently with foreign people. Nevertheless, the coin has two sides and this is not an exception.
On the other hand, speaking a language that is not our mother language also bring us some disadvantages. First of all, linguistic difference can cause some troubles in society involve relationships, taboos ,customs,... . For example, if you go to Korea to study, they are speak Korean, that will be a distance between you and your friends, you can be feel isolated , or if you have a cross-cultural marriage, you may have a strict forbiddance by your parents-in-law. The next problem is that you can be misunderstood in the way that you communicate with indigenous people, maybe because of the voice that some native people can not understand. And last but not least, in all my truthfulness, there are still exist the discrimination in some nations between immigrants and native people, especially at working and studying environment . For instance , student can be bulled by their classmate because of the difference about language and country .
In conclusion, living and talking a foreign language bring you a lot of intriguing experiences but also cause some troubles . If you want to gain the success, at first you have to win yourself, be stronger and be independent to cope with all problems that you will face whilst living abroad.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, still, for example, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 24.0651302605 208% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2052.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 407.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04176904177 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92871444855 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.496314496314 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 631.8 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5974014337 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4210526316 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.47368421053 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 5.01903807615 518% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281735391 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0917431894719 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696915265604 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190191962222 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0211093160945 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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